Friday, March 5, 2010

people

this is a poem i like that i wrote so yea





there are people in this world
that are not quite right
they do things
that they should not do





they do weed
they do crack
they do it for no reason
and they wined up dead


people murder other people
sometimes for no reason
they do nasty things to kill them
and we don't understand why


girls have baby's at 16
and the dad walks out on the girl
and the girl is left alone
with her new born baby




the world is dieing and no one cares
some people try to help
but it doesnt do a thing
people need to realize what is happening





people need to do something
but we dont know what to do
we wish we could help
but we can't


because we are people
and we can only do so much

11 comments:

Emily said...

so true...people do things in this world that aren't worth doing...all because of the smallest things
~E

jordan!! said...

yep i like that poem because its all true


~jordan!!

Emily said...

yeah, it shows real life especially what lots of people are going through now
~E

jordan!! said...

excatly!


~jordan!!

Emily said...

i'm sorry popcorn! ur drawings will be done tuesday! :( i got caught up in videos hahaha i'm sorry though it WILL be done tuesday for sure!
~Emolaylay

jordan!! said...

thats ok whenever u got time emolaylay!!



~popcorn!

Mrs. T...hompson said...

Popcorn~
This poem is oh so true, BUT there *is* something that can be done. Parents need to be more involved in their kids' lives. The more parents pay attention to their kids, the less likely children will end up this way. Just my opinion.
<3 Mrs. T...hompson

Emily said...

i also agree with mrs t...hompson! a lot of kids are becoming drug users and get involved in the wrong thing usually because they lack attention at home (moms words) so i think if parents did that a lot of kids would be a LOT better off
~Emolaylay

jordan!! said...

lol you are both right lol!!

Mrs. T...hompson said...

I'm *always* right.
<3 Mrs. T...hompson

Unknown said...

Hi Mrs.T...Hompson!!! hehe. I know I've said this before but...I HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER!